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t or add. I'll attach the questions, my rubric, as well as my answers I made. It would really help me out please. The questions: 1.) Choose two somatosensory receptors. Please include a description of each receptor, what they sense, and which part of the brain processes the information from the receptor. 2.) Provide a discussion of the thyroid gland. Include the following: Description of the thyroid gland's structure and location. Description of the cells of the thyroid gland. Description of the hormones secreted by the thyroid gland and their functions. Description of how thyroid hormones are controlled by hormones secreted by the hypothalamus and anterior pituitary gland. Description of how the feedback system works in the cases of high or low thyroid hormone levels. 3. Describe the cardiac cycle. Include descriptions of the 3 phases, the pressure changes in each of the heart's chambers, valves are open and closed, and blood flows during each step. My answer: 1.) Exteroceptor - receives external stimuli from outside of the body. An example, the skin (Thermoreceptors) detects the temperature of the outside area of the body. Interceptor - receives stimuli from inside of the body. An example would be blood pressure as well as blood oxygen levels. 2.) Thyroid Gland is located near the front lower part of the neck, beneath Adam's apple. Its structure includes Thyroid Epithelial that form follicles filled with colloid - a protein-rich reservoir of the materials needed for thyroid hormone production. The cells are responsible for releasing hormones that control metabolism (Energy levels). The thyroid gland releases triiodothyronine (T3) and thyroxine (T4). These hormones regulate weight, energy levels, internal temperature, skin, and growth. When the hypothalamus and pituitary function well, they can detect when hormone levels are low, which causes them to produce more TRH and TSH, which stimulates the thyroid to produce hormones. When the hormone levels exceed their limit, they then have less TRH and TSH, which results in reduced hormone production by the thyroid. Feedback is when a product feeds back into its initial cycle. The Feedback includes both positive and negative feedback. Positive Feedback is when a product provides back to increase production: an example, milk production by a mother for her baby. As the baby suckles, nerve messages from the nipple cause the pituitary gland to secrete prolactin. Prolactin, in turn, stimulates the mammary glands to produce milk, so the baby suckles more. Which causes more prolactin to be secreted and more milk to is made. Negative Feedback is when a product feeds back decreases production; it brings down show if they increase past their limit. It also controls insulin secretion by the pancreas. 3.) The Cardiac Cycle takes place from the beginning of a heartbeat to the next. It contains two periods: One is when the heart muscle relaxes and refills with blood, called diastole, following a time when it begins contraction and pumping of blood, systole. Once emptied, the heart then relaxes and expands to receive another inrush of blood coming back from the lungs and other areas of the body. The atrioventricular valves remain open while the semilunar valves are closed. During the middle part of the diastole, a small amount of blood flows into the ventricles. The blood flows from the veins and passes the atria fills the ventricles. The pressure in both ventricles is close to zero as a result.

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e if I've argued my point well enough. The topic I chose is the annexation of Hawaii. Here's my thesis: The annexation of Hawaii and its eventual incorporation into the United States was a continuation of the American legacy of colonization; driven by capitalism, it replaced the native system of governance, and diminished the native way of life. Does my paper make sense?

ution, regression, decision trees Past paper has 5 questions (attached), we will have 4. Complexity of questions will be reduced slightly for decision trees and regression. Visualisation question – written in word file or hand-written and scanned or photographed. Normal distribution: Sketch using online normal distribution visualisation applet (add notes around this to discuss if necessary) or sketch by hand and scan or photograph. For mathematical workings, use formulae sheet, copy, paste and adapt, or scan / photograph your workings and upload. Decision tree – use Office smart shapes, or sketch by hand and scan or photograph. If formulae are required, then use formula sheet, copy, paste and adapt. Regression – written in word file or hand-written and scanned or photographed. MCDA – written in word file or hand-written and scanned or photographed. Remember if they appear, decision trees and regression will be a little less technical than they have been in the past. (To allow more of a buffer with regards to time available to complete and upload). Visualisation and MCDA questions will be more general (strengths and weaknesses, key messages, make some recommendations). Exam questions will be set so as to minimise practical and logistical difficulties in uploading answers.

s are as follows: Present an argument that explains the most important cause(s) and the most important effect(s) of refugee crises in world history. Papers should use an array of specific examples drawn from at least three chapters of Spohnholz’s Ruptured Lives as well as historical evidence from at least one of the primary sources in Primary Source Activity 2. In your conclusion, suggest at least one way that understanding this history can help us address refugees today, referring to a recent news article on the subject. The paper should be double-spaced in 12-point font, use footnote citations, and be 2-3 pages long.

he first time. He was Recently released from state prison where he served an 18-year term for murder and armed robbery. His visit is part of a plan for aftercare arranged by the HIV Liaison Nurse in the prison. He denies practicing any behaviors that could put him at high risk for HIV disease, including having had sex with men or injecting drugs, while in prison or before he was imprisoned. He was first diagnosed with HIV infection five years ago. Mr. J.D. was married before he was arrested, but he was divorced 15 years ago. Although he has two adult children, Mr. J.D. has no contact with his children or former wife. He believes that they moved out of state. His parents are both deceased. He also lost contact with his five brothers and sisters. Currently, Mr. J.D. lives in a short-term, subsidized, group residence for newly released inmates. While in prison he completed high school and earned a GED diploma. In prison he also learned basic computer skills and answered telephone calls for the state's tourist bureau, which was staffed by inmates. He plans to enroll in a community college to learn more about computers. He has job interviews scheduled for several telemarketing companies. His medical history is unremarkable except for sexually transmitted diseases. Shortly after he was arrested he was diagnosed and treated for urethral gonorrhea. His physical examination is Unremarkable. 1. Read the case and Identify biological variables. 2. Identify Psychological variables. 3. Identify Social variables Case – 2 Jane is a middle class American housewife and a bar attender. She is a HIV infected woman who feels isolated and experiences’ shame and stigma in the community she is living. Her economic and social resources are inadequate to meet her needs. She has three children and her role as care giver, wife and mother is lost or limited. She fears transmitting HIV to her family members by contact. She is depressed and confused to disclose her illness to children. She feels disappointed for the loss of reproductive choice due to some gynecological problems associated with HIV. Her husband is a drug addict and jobless, dependent on the family. 1. Read the case and Identify biological variables. 2. Identify Psychological variables. 3. Identify Social variables Case – 3 A 65year old HIV couple from Thailand is living alone in a suburban village with no family support available. . They were depressed due to isolation, internalized shame and perceived stigma. They have several issues with health such as sleeping problems, Arthritis, Diabetes. Sometimes the couple was reluctant for medication due to many medicines in a day. They are confined to home due to mobility problems. Though they are covered under Social security system but it is not sufficient to fulfil their needs due to rising medical needs. 1. Read the case and Identify biological variables. 2. Identify Psychological variables. 3. Identify Social variables Case - 4 Kathy met a man, he was charming and handsome. They talked for hours the first night they met. She told him about her last relationship and how it ended with the police taking her boyfriend away after he brutally attacked her. The charmer told her, that he had been single for many years after his partner died of AIDS. She asked him straight up what his HIV status was and he told Kathy "he was clean and healthy". They began seeing each other regularly. She was falling for this guy and him for her. They played safe at first. But as time passed and their relationship grew stronger and began to relax. They had an active social life and enjoyed each other and going out with friends. Life was very good until February 11, 2010. She discovered a hospital document that had her partners name on it. The document was mixed in with some old holiday cards he had collected and saved over the years. The paper was dated 2002 and stated her partner was HIV poz and had been for 10 years prior. She was devastated! Over the 2+ years they we were together and had the 'HIV poz' conversation many times and he always said how happy he was to be 'clean'. Kathy was tested 2 days later and the results came back positive. Kathy moved out that afternoon- it was her birthday. I am heart broken, confused and angry. Being lied to by someone she loved so much just adds to the pain of having to deal with the news of being HIV poz. 1. Read the case and Identify biological variables. 2. Identify Psychological variables. 3. Identify Social variables

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ht, and I'm having difficulty formulating my research and organizing the paper. I could use assistance breaking down my paper and coming up with content/points.

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addressed everything I'm required to, so I need help condensing what I have and deciding whether there are key parts missing that I will need to add. I don't exactly need help writing, but help shortening what I've written and deciding whether or not to write more. I think the first step to getting this done is looking at the writing prompt and my essay and confirming which things I have already addressed sufficiently and which things are missing or incomplete. Level of detail/clarity, flow, and transitions would probably be the second step. "Level of detail" is where I can hopefully shorten some parts while still sufficiently addressing what I need to. But if you think a different approach or order is good, please let me know.

rmacology class and I need an abstract and to answer the 11 questions at the end of the case study. Everything needs to be cited and after fully answering the questions I need to relate the question to the guy in the case study.

ase write a two page paper reflecting your individual career goals and your plan(s) on how you are going to achieve your goals. Focus introduction on how you have chosen your career path. Summarize specifically in the conclusion on how each of these goals will fulfill your own personal mission. You may want to include information on your interests, values, and personality and what might have led to the formation of these goals.

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